I'm likin the intro. The bass sample is pretty weak. 1:00-2:00 is kinda boring. It could use some more elements. I enjoy the pads and that 16th riff, but there isnt a whole lot of energy. I like the lead, but i find the sample a bit on the cheesey side. There are a lot of good elements here, but the song needs some fine-tuning. For instance, i think you could cut out like a minute of this song. Otherwise it sounds kind of drawn out.

Nice work