Hi guys download my new melody and tell me what you think

http://members.lycos.co.uk/inclubwe...in_Tune_Cut.mp3

RIGHT click SAVE TARGET AS
10x !

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Last edited by Dj-Portal on Feb-28-2004 at 14:22

Hi fella welcome to the boards.
About the melody - its pretty good as i told you on ICQ, the only thing that boders me is the emptyness. Add some more elemtents, pads etc.
Cheers

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Well i'll try... anyways you'll be at my house tommorow helping me improve it

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Can't download this

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www.fractalstructure.com

Why ? the link is fine..
just RIGHT click SAVE TARGET AS
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Shield & Armor !

Dont enter the link !
right click on it and then click
"SAVE TARGET AS"
and download it

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It's ok now... it was a problem with my Opera browser.

About your track:
I really liked the idea ! The melody is very nice.But the instruments are a bit simple. Try to make some FAT sounds. I think your track needs more bass and maybe another reverb effect.
Cheerz,
Max

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Thnaks ! I'll do my best improving it and i'll keep posting new
samples from this track

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The melody is pretty good i guess nothing to emotional thought...
I didn't like those sudden kicks you got going there, pads sounds very simple and flat, not enough power in them.
Fractal already mentioned the lack of bass in the build... other than that it's pretty nice, main synth sound cool.
Just work on making your mix more complex and full, its sounds abit empty and standard as it is now.

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10x For the feedback i'll try improve the track by them

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I really like some of the ideas in here, especially the pads and lead.

I would love to play about with the midi if possible.

I'll PM ya.

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Nice warm and happy sound to it I really like that, but as others also said already, ... add some more elements to it to create a real climax.
Keep up the good work!

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