Alright, workn' on this one for a few days. What do you think? It's kinda mellow and only done till the breakdown. New melody that fits the intro for the buildup or same with more punch?

Miami Turn Normalized Thanks for ANY input. JohnnyK

Mate, if you can provide a link so that we can download it, it would be very helpful. I tried to but you need to sign up, and I tried streaming it but it took too long so I came back and it had already played and made me stream again cos they have their own crappy player, so I had to buffer again and I couldn't be bothered waiting that long.

If you put up a direct link, people are much more likely to have a listen to your track.

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