Hiya

Very emotional and nice calm atmoshpere..liked it..

but the clap i think it doesn't fit..the sample you used, also the kick is bit overpowerd.

thats all

Thanks for the feedback Massive! Much appreciated

Clap you say? Yeh, I see what you mean. I'm finding it harder than I thought to get a decent clap in there, I can't even think of one that would sound right. It's kind of annoying me.

Kickdrum overpowered eh? I'll get a chance to listen on some decent rig this evening and will listen out for that specifically.

Thanks again man.

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Kick seems okay to me. The clap is a bit standard, maybe try using something else instead of a clap. It can be fun making weird sounds to use instead.

Try filtering off the attack and giving it a nice long reverb tail. That usually makes the clap positioned sound a bit nicer in the mix and can provide a little bit more momentum.

As for your melody its alright, just not my kind of music unfortunately, too slow. Sounds nicely made though.

Maybe bring down the level of the clap if you keep the same one and try and boost the arp lead a little, or better yet, compress the master channel which should bring up the synth sounds a bit.

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Wow, this one took me by surprise. I like the melody alot, the whole harmony is just great and very relaxing. I wouldnt mind remixing it one day .
Cheers, realy touched me. Good work.
P.S - Work on the clap abit and this will be a killer

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nice melody! but definately use another clap
it seems to need more high freq's when i listen to it on my radio, but that's probably my radio
nice work!

john

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Thanks fellas! Touched by the feedback and am really encouraged.

>hey cheggy: Your tips are gold man, gold. I'll be trying that stuff out tonight. Thanks!

>EternalMusic: Wow, man. I'm so glad it touched you man, it's quality to know that. Anytime you want to do a remix go right ahead. I'd be honoured mate. Anything you'd need, just let me know!

>John: Glad your ear spotted that. My mate just whacked it through SoundForge at work and it has made a large difference - brought out a bit more sparkle through it's enhance facility.

I'll change these things tonight and upload again.

Cheers!
EDIT: Make that tomorrow. Bit tired this eve.
EDIT: Oh all right, the weekend then

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Last edited by BassAngel on Feb-27-2004 at 00:17

Very emotional


gonna digispin it for a warmup set
great vibe,and production & BASS !
don't thing it needs anything other than what the guys allready said,
i think you accomplished what you set out to do...
love to hear more.

Libra.

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Hello!

I can't really say any more than the others before me, but I also wanted to say that you've made a very nice piece of work.
Actualy, the clap is a bit simple and overused, but because of it I felt that this track was made in the past and unfortunately I could hear it first tonight. It's like I missed this track in the last years.
And yes, it's very touching. Love the melody.

Keep up!

this is quite nice, the synths are too standard and amateury, love the bassline, clap doesn't really bother me.

have a play with the elements and get a really nice string in there if u can, the 1 u have at the minute doesn't do the tune justice by a long way and cram a shitload of fx in there

this is defo a winner, just needs the hard yards putting in

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Based on hearing this, I can see that my tutorial really did help you because the bass is excellent in this; far better than most of the bass I hear posted here, good job on that.

I'd agree with Terry about the synths, possibly a little on the cheapish side. Melodies are quite nice though, this is really nice and chill. Keep it up!

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Originally posted by dj-sean Based on hearing this, I can see that my tutorial really did help you because the bass is excellent in this; far better than most of the bass I hear posted here, good job on that. I'd agree with Terry about the synths, possibly a little on the cheapish side. Melodies are quite nice though, this is really nice and chill. Keep it up!

terry wtf!

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