I'm putting together a track. I'm still workin on sounds, melodies, percussions etc but so far this is the idea & what i've come up with...

Feedback would be greatly appreciated but remember be nice *LOL*!!!

********TUNE HAS NEW CHANGES SO FOR THOSE WHO HAVE MISSED OUT NOW IS YOUR CHANCE TO LISTEN!!!!!!!!

click here to listen

Last edited by richard raiban on Mar-05-2004 at 20:36

..it's not bad,
but either way it has potential
nice

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Originally posted by Schryer Hey Bro. That is a sweet Tune! Keep it up, you'll hit the charts someday and hopefully I'll get a copy to drive the crowd wild! Send me all your productions, I would love to hear them! See you at Systems.

dont forget to call that lady!!! you promised her a callback @ 10.00am SHARP!!!

yep... this track is ready to go to a mastering house where all the tweaking is done then out to a record pressing plant to get the promo copies pressed then off to chase down the record labels u go!

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Hmmm... good job Richard.

That percussive ride sort of sample that has the rhythmic pattern 'long, short-short', take the reverb off it. I like how sharp it sounds, but the reverb (or whatever) makes it sound like someone's playing pingpong.

The bottom end needs to be thicker too methinks, but that could just be my computer. Sounds like you've got it compressed well. Maybe too well. I don't know... Have a look @ that.

Those are my suggestions. Again, good job.

nice job Rich

couple of things you can add one: vocal samples will feet properly
some atmospheric stubbs on top of your melody part and also some drums percussions will do be awesome as well

overall it is an awesome work.....

well guys, thank you very much for the feedback! ive removed the track and will post it up at a later date once adjustments have been made!!!

thanks again everyone!!!

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Originally posted by richard raiban well guys, thank you very much for the feedback! ive removed the track and will post it up at a later date once adjustments have been made!!! thanks again everyone!!!

ahhh no wonder i get perfectnav. oh well cant wait until you post it again.

I'd like to hear this.

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Originally posted by dj_moonshine ahhh no wonder i get perfectnav. oh well cant wait until you post it again.

alrighty...ive added some changes and this is what it sounds like now...

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Originally posted by breathesteve I'd like to hear this.

now is your chance...

****refer to the first post to listen

Last edited by richard raiban on Mar-05-2004 at 20:43

Ill have a listen but drop me a line. im looking for more canadian producers to have on my show

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