Sounds too much like a march, which although not bad in itself, is something I don't generally like.
Need more percussive elements, and I didn't really dig the intro. Leading melody has potential, it just isn't executed in the right fashion.
Try cleaning up the sound, everything seems to be muddying everything else.
Mar-09-2004 01:38
hey cheggy
like a tiger
Registered: Aug 2002
Location: Sydney, Australia
Cool track. There is still a lot of your psy feel in there, which is good. I agree about the marching band comment. The snare drums are what's causing it. Maybe change the snares to something a little less accoustic sounding, and not quite so loud in the mix.
Apart from that, I likes it. Intro could have been bettre yeah, but I liked all the weird sounds in there.
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Mar-09-2004 06:04
digitalbeat666
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Aug 2003
Location: Helsinki, Finland
new track
Yes, I agree on thar snare drums part, them are too acoustic sounding. Also I was using too much distortion on many instruments, that's why it's muddied and the mixing is not very well layered I think. I made a remaster version of the track but the synth sound is a little bit loud there too. But practising makes the master. Thanks for comments folks