Woah a track by me....

people who know me will agree its not very often this happens.
Well here it is, its kinda mellow but can still get you moving err I think...

anyways, its far from the finished article so I really want some suggestions

cheers

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Mellow alright ,
Love the kick!!!! Generaly its a nice tune, the break is abit empty for my taste. Nice bass and melody. Keep working on it

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Okay, the main thing is that everything is too simple. You need more elements, fx, secondary synthlines and most of all percs. The percs are too simplistic, they make the tune drag.

I like your melody and chord progression a lot tho.

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it's really good. it is kind of minimalistic but not in a bad way.. it was really relaxing and sounded well produced in terms of the quality. good job.

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not bad mate, lacking a bit of energy, nice and mellow though. well done

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Being the MASSIVE Leach that i am, i d/led this...

I like it.

the melody is really nice, theres no big obvious synths, which is good IMO. the breakdown isnt OTT either, which i like too. Like some of the others said, its pretty simple, but i like that. Its nice chilled trance, like its supposed to be (isnt it?) Adding more effects etc might make it into something that it isnt supposed to be. if you get me?

I think i would like to hear a bit more of a bassline in it? maybe antoher layer of bass, making it a bit more complex. or maybe making the bass a bit more prominant. (although my computer speakers are a bit shit, so it might just be that)

really good job.

192? :lol:

like the melody a lot
kicks well gay tho
beef the percussion up and make it a little less airy fairy and you've got a half decent tune

i like this mr kendall, dont like the acid wannabe bits in the middle tho, get some fx goin on, thicken the bass and yer laffin

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took it down coz I'm a bellend

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Originally posted by George Kendall took it down coz I'm a bellend

you bellend

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