Something different. Some cool ideas in there, but it dragged on for a bit. Maybe some percussion variation and a stronger kick would help out. The kick that you use is really hard to make out. Maybe it is supposed to be like that, I don't know, but I think a stronger kick could make it a little more danceable.

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Originally posted by hey cheggy Something different. Some cool ideas in there, but it dragged on for a bit. Maybe some percussion variation and a stronger kick would help out. The kick that you use is really hard to make out. Maybe it is supposed to be like that, I don't know, but I think a stronger kick could make it a little more danceable.

Thanx cheggy, alot of people have been making similar comments like yours, yet, I kinda like the minimalist aproach on this one, but who knows, I'm sure to remix it later, thanx for your comments, Pils.

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hrmmm... sort of crappy in a good and experimental kind of way

maybe if you made the beginning synth a couple of octaves lower and then came in with a nice bass it would of worked better.. (a bass other then a weak off-beat bass) sounds like it's in major.. which doesn't really work with this sort of track..

I like the synth-snare.. sounds good with this.. i'm not sure what you're going for on this track but I honestly wouldn't listen to it again.. too weird and doesn't have a very good melody/harmony..

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Originally posted by alanzo hrmmm... sort of crappy in a good and experimental kind of way maybe if you made the beginning synth a couple of octaves lower and then came in with a nice bass it would of worked better.. (a bass other then a weak off-beat bass) sounds like it's in major.. which doesn't really work with this sort of track.. I like the synth-snare.. sounds good with this.. i'm not sure what you're going for on this track but I honestly wouldn't listen to it again.. too weird and doesn't have a very good melody/harmony..

I hear ya mate, and your right, its very experimental, I really wasn't going for melodic.... I was going for wierd but, I like your idaes for this track, thanx, I'll keep you posted if I make any changes, Pils.

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