I think It's too short to give a good feedback.

so I listened an other track: Forever
I liked the melody nice progressive, but I suggest you'd lower the high synth in the intro about an octave since it's a bit too high and I suggest a slight more deeper bass

Anyway, the track is very nice and my sugestions woundn't make it sound a lot better.

Skiz

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Originally posted by Skiz I think It's too short to give a good feedback. so I listened an other track: Forever I liked the melody nice progressive, but I suggest you'd lower the high synth in the intro about an octave since it's a bit too high and I suggest a slight more deeper bass Anyway, the track is very nice and my sugestions woundn't make it sound a lot better. Skiz

Thank You Skiz for your reply,
I agree with u about the bass in "Forever" i'll like to remake that song when i got better equiment...

later

djempyrean

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