i giventhe track some listen, and i think it's very plain, the piano is breakdown is good but that background synth just sounds muffled and annyoing, the melody is ok, sounds a bit pushy but still ok, the piano that begins around 06:00 just sounds offbeat and awful.

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"I believe that's referred to as intelligent drum & bass, which obviously means there's a genre of stupid drum & bass out there" (John Peel)

Ack, get rid of that piano! Or at least put it in the proper key...

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yeah I know something is weird with that piano the song is not totally finisehd any other suggestions...the song really takes of from 2:00 minutes...bye the way this is my first real production ...

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I have very sensitive ears and a lot of the song sounds off key. The piano sounds very harsh at times. The piano that starts before 6.00 and continues through the rest of the song does not sound good...at all. It is VERY off key. You need to get rid of it. Ouch!