My attempt to create a track :-) It's my second attempt at all, so don't be mad about it

http://vilda.borec.cz/vilda_gigi.mp3

I'm sorry for my english......I know, it's not good at all

This is somesort of happy hardcore, right?

To my liking it has a too much things happening at the same time.
And the strings at 1:36 get too loud or it is just my crappy headphones..

Lead melody is alrite, though it isn't your own.

And the track ends like running into a concrete wall.

This is somesort of happy hardcore, right?
It's something like something I don't think it's a specifik genre

And the strings at 1:36 get too loud or it is just my crappy headphones..
At 1:36 are basses out and there is only a melody And on my 5.1 it's a little bit more quite then other parts....

Lead melody is alrite, though it isn't your own.
No.....You're right...it's not mine .... it's old melody called PopCorn BTW: What does 'alrite' mean ?

And the track ends like running into a concrete wall.
I thought, I'll be some kind of fade out.....I'm sorry, if it doesn't sound like fade out

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Originally posted by [-V-I-L-D-A-] No.....You're right...it's not mine .... it's old melody called PopCorn BTW: What does 'alrite' mean ?

Yeah thought that it was PopCorn.

alrite = all right = ok