whats up everyone? i'm back with my 2nd production. let me know what you folks think of it. i feel its alot better than my first track produced.

http://home.comcast.net/~enrgynix/e...production2.mp3

Last edited by eNRGyNiX on May-03-2004 at 17:49

Just for future reference - please do at least give your track proper id3 tag and a title, you have no idea how many "trance1" files I have among the hundreds of mp3s I've downloaded from here...

Aside from that it's pretty nice. The production is tight and the tune has an evil, eerie feel to it even if it is quite simple.

I must say it's very short, though. It's already halfway through before anything happens and by the time it progresses it's already over. I'd say extend it, put some more synths on it and let it build steam/tension slowly. Or is this not even finished? I mean it just stops like you got bored with it...

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plus
kick is ok
first hihat arent that bad
interesting synths in the beginning
the lead is ok

minus
the snare is ??
build up is too long *bored*
need much more elements in the track )more rhythm
where is the offbeat hihat?

conclusion
I would have guessed this is made with Fruity Loops, anyways, the lead is interesting, u do have an idea going, but it lacks in overall, and in depth, u need much more elements of rhythm, to give it more drive, u need more than just one synth going to make it sound more full, its not bad for being 2nd production, but the track definitive needs more elements and production time

4/10

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thanks Mr. Mystery. i know the track is short, i'm still trying to finish the track up. what kind of synths would you recommend that sound nice? because..right now i'm using the pro-53 and FL. i'm very much still a beginner.. so i hope to get better with time. haha you should have heard my first production Mystery... i think you'd laugh.. lol

Subtle, thanks for the reply and for the good ideas.

Alright, let's take a listen...

Nice kickdrum. Pretty decent bassline, too. And nice percussion work. Some more FX on the hats and such may make them stand out more and be more unique, but they're pretty good as is.


Okay, breakdown time... seems decent so far...

Nice lead synth. Back off the reverb some, though. It sounds very wishy-washy.

Sounds kind of hard-house-ish, now. Not necessarily a bad thing. Oh, and it's over, hehe. Guess you aren't done.

Okay. That riff at the end sounded alright, but maybe you need to fatten up the lead a bit. Also, just as a personal preference, the riff energy (or energy potential), doesn't seem to match up well with the more subdued, darker feel of the rest of the song. That's more of a personal note, though.

But seriously, this is really good for a second try. Much, much, much better than my second try.


Edit: It actually reminds me of DJ Darkzone's "Infinity In Your Hands," hehe.

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for a second track it's pretty impressive...keep up the good work...just follow the tips the oterh guys gave you here nd you'll be fine.

I just had to coment cause it was your second tune and I was impressed with the work.

Limit out!

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Originally posted by DJ_Ikronix Edit: It actually reminds me of DJ Darkzone's "Infinity In Your Hands," hehe.

hehe yeah it does...
anyways a nice second attempt...very good and it shows alot of potential...
i cant give you much advice on it because im sorta of a beginner as well

Dark feeling. Not bad. Quite like it but intro is abit too long and theres only one melody? No other syth to come along to make it fullness?

But its a good try. Far better then me

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