listen to this song and tell me what you think plz

Which song?

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"I expect to pass through life but once. If therefore, there be any kindness I can show, or any good thing I can do to any fellow being, let me do it now, and not defer or neglect it, as I shall not pass this way again."

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.as...s=156657&T=3342

oops, i thought i put an attatchment. its called down

I see you've only been making music for about a year, so I won't pull this track apart as much as I could. But stick with it and you'll only get better.

I think that's the best way to reply to that.

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whats wrong with it???

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Originally posted by vanessa12 whats wrong with it???

it's produced very amateurish. Sorry to put it this way, i have to be honest with you.

Drums are very minimal, synths & sounds are very weak, fx are way to minimal, the "vocal part" sounds very weird, the piano sound repeats all over again in a very irritating way, well that's about it.

all i can say is: try to listen to dance music alot, listen to the build up, use of effects, synth use, drumlines, basslines.

After this start to play with you music software/hardware and you'll see the improvements.

what did you use to make this?

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