Sounds pretty cool and professional.

Maybe lower the reverb on the snare a little. And add some variation to that bass breakdown at around 2:00. It does really beg for repitition, but synth variation would be nice. Bring some focus back to the beat, because that synth takes it all away.

Maybe in the middle you should have a melodic or chill-out-pad breakdown and then it slowly goes back into the original synth melody.

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The song sounds distorted, and it doesn't sound like it was intentionall so lower the volume before you render it... anyways, I like it, but the mixing REALLY needs to be taken care of... The bassline is so muddy and kind of kills the kick, so u should probablt eq down the bass on some of the synthlayers...

hur som helst, det här e väl samma låt som du postat ett par ggr innan fast i andra versioner? jag gillar synthslingan skarpt, får man kanske ge sig på ett remixförsök?

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nice work

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Sounding very nice! It tends to get on the repetitive side though, filter sweeps & synth changes feel desperately needed. If it were my tune I’d be tempted to slap a heavy side chain compressor over the thing, and go for a That Mucho sounding tune, the rest of it certainly fits.

Oh, and does it have a title yet?