Hey guys!

I would really appreciate any feedback and advice as I am rather new to producing - I did this lil toon in Reason 2.5

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Trevor Kay - A Swim with the Fishes

Thanks for the taking the time to listen - I'm open to any and all suggestions.

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Last edited by sooper on Jun-08-2004 at 13:23

Wow! I'm impressed, I love this type of spacy breaks/house!!!

Sounds very professional too!

Reminds me of Petter - These Days

Wow I really like this a lot, thanks man!! Love the title as well, seems very fitting. I don't know what to critique about it, I just love it.

9/10

Caleb

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Spaced! Nice one sooper

Although i think maybe some fishy sounds or vocals (not much) would do this song good
7.5/10000000000000000000 j/k lol 8.5/10

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Caleb & Netrom - thanks very much for the kind words!! I wasn't sure if the housey/breaks combo would be appealing - thanks for the encouragement!

Please keep the feedback coming - thanks!

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Great work man, I really enjoy the chilling vibes from this tune.

I love the piano melody that comes in before the last break, but maybe it could be a little louder.

8.5/10 - keep it up man.

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Originally posted by hansolo Great work man, I really enjoy the chilling vibes from this tune. I love the piano melody that comes in before the last break, but maybe it could be a little louder. 8.5/10 - keep it up man.

Thanks HanSolo! good feedback, as always, from you - I'd like to see what other suggestions I get, then I'll go back and re-tool a bit, including raising the piano level at the end.

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Wow, this is a really interesting piece of music you've got here! I absolutely love the melody that comes in at the middle point of the track, and the pads around the 7 minute mark...

You're kidding right about being new to producing?

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Originally posted by MaRt Wow, this is a really interesting piece of music you've got here! I absolutely love the melody that comes in at the middle point of the track, and the pads around the 7 minute mark... You're kidding right about being new to producing?

I have to say, your positive feedback really made my day! I try really hard to stay away from typical production formulas...

I've been messing around on Reason for over a year and a half now, But most of that time was spent teaching myself how to use it, and learning what's involved in electronic music production. only recently have I begun to understand its potential, and take advantage of it... I've played guitar for a long time, and I guess I have a knack for writing unique melodies, but everything else involved in production from sequencing to percussion & FX has eluded me since I began a little while back. But from all the kind words, it seems maybe I'm starting to get it!

Thanks again guys - your input is invaluable!

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I gots some of them there songs I wrote, mmm hmmm that's right ---> www.TrevorKay.tk

We are the ones we've been waiting for

so when can we expect this on 12"?

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Amazing, Unique is what i see as the most talented, This is certainly unique. Great melody, keep this up man.

Amazing... It´s even funky @ 1.02 minutes... at the middle the melody comes in ... OMFG what a sick melody..
overall a VERY good tune to chill

maybe make a harder mix of this aswell ?

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Caleb you rock!
Thanks Burns, I'm glad you liked this one.

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Originally posted by T_2199 Amazing... It´s even funky @ 1.02 minutes... at the middle the melody comes in ... OMFG what a sick melody.. overall a VERY good tune to chill maybe make a harder mix of this aswell ?

I'm not sure I'm up for doing a harder mix, but if anyone is interested in remixing it, it would be my pleasure to pass along the midi file. Just reply here and let me know, or email me at [email protected]

Thanks again everybody!

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I gots some of them there songs I wrote, mmm hmmm that's right ---> www.TrevorKay.tk

We are the ones we've been waiting for