My third track. Please let me know what you think and if i'm on the right track

Sunrise

Use a different kick for starters and work on your perc, hats, snares. Use something other than 808 or things sounding like it.

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I think the song is pretty good, it's a really good arrangment, and there are lots of good elements. The sliding synth thing was cool. The track has a good flow to it.

The biggest problem is the sound; as eulerfx pointed out, do some work on the drums + percs. I would add to that : do some work on your synth sounds and overall production.

I believe that the exact same tune, but with the right sounds ( beefy phat sounds with tonnes of attitude and atmosphere ) and with the mix compressed all to hell to give it punch and drive, would be a really excellent tune.

Production takes a long time to get right, ( and I'm nowhere near there yet myself ); but so does creating melodies and interesting arrangment. You've definitely got that part down, so keep practising dude! I'm looking forward to hearing where you go from here.

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