You can have a listen here, let me know what you think

http://www.houseaddict.com/forums/s...=&threadid=1713

Overall I think it needs more/stronger elements, FX, pads..it feelt abit empty.

the clean break at 2.25 felt strange, when you mute everything except the lead...a smoother transition or something that builds up to that break would feel better, more anticipated.

the heavy lead sounds really cool tough!

the beat also feels abit empty, like it´s missing elements. perhaps add percussive layers to fill in the "empty gaps" in the beat to get a more richer and fuller sound.

But the overall sound is pretty interesting, with some added work on this it could sound really cool.

take care,

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im not a fan of house, only a little prog house
all i can tell u is that its good quality
and it sounds like g and d a little
for someone who likes house i think its good
good work m8, peace out

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