I made this a while back, i started with some riff, made a great intro, spend alot of time, but when it came to the main part and break, i had no real inspiration.

there for it turned out to be generic trance track, think that temple is better, but oh well

Link
http://www.johnsteenbergen.com/faha...-Revelation.mp3

tnx for John for hosting.

Made it in Reason.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

I like the subtlety of the melody, it flows really well. Nice and calm track you've made. It is a bit standard and uninspired but production wise you're definitely improving. Nice work.

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5) State of Matter - Saving Icarus (Original Mix)

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Listening.

Really cool intro. I love the production quality. Pro samples. Loving those pads. Heh, I see what you mean by lack of inspiration at the break. Don't sweat it. Nice chilled track.

Nice to see you improving.

Those pads are lovely..

Really nice track to chill with..

very relaxing massive mate.

its a bit boring but it is chilled, its got a tinge of david forbes who i adore, sooo ur going the rite way, u will improve like all of us, u will write melodys that will probably suprise urself and use a great range of percussion and fx in one of ur next upcoming future tracks.....

just keep at it, its very good track but it needs to be more fuller and complex mate.

temple is better. But one of ur upcoming tracks whateva it be will probably own it.

All in good time mate ur extremly skilled...just write , add then add when u think its had enough elements ... add.

add to the extent its busy, but not too busy... naturally.

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before i go to sleep tnx all

don't worrie silver..

this track wasn't supposed to shock anyone ..

soon, you will hear a piece of Shinsharaa(prog trance) when i am done with it.

youl be suprised i assure you that

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

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Originally posted by Massive84 soon, you will hear a piece of Shinsharaa(prog trance) when i am done with it. youl be suprised i assure you that

Oooh.. Can't hardly wait.

Sorry, this track didn't appeal to me at all... it sounded a bit flat and uninspired like you said. The melody while interesting, doesn't hold my interest longer than like a minute. The synth is ok, but it seems a bit... umm... lacking. It's hard for me to describe. I DO like the intro though!

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4.) Matt Hardwick vs. Smith & Pledger - Day One (Above & Beyond Remix)

Awesome pads you got there... the melody works, nothing really special though. I didn't like the synth that much because of it's lack of energy.
There's nothing special with this one, but it doesn't sound bad at all.

Great work!

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Originally posted by Massive84 before i go to sleep tnx all don't worrie silver.. this track wasn't supposed to shock anyone .. soon, you will hear a piece of Shinsharaa(prog trance) when i am done with it. youl be suprised i assure you that

u got me on my toes man!!!!!

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Nice tune man!
Very chilled and relaxing, some of the sounds seem to be filtered which helps make a cool and relaxing atmosphere.
The bassline sounds great! Great sound work, everything is very clear.
The melody suits the atmosphere perfectly, great job there.

Keep up the good work!

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I think this is the best I heard from you so far Fahad. Much more professional than your previous tracks. I agree with State of Matter that it's a bit standard, but I think you're on the good way mate!

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