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The track is definitely sweet - nice job mate! While I think it definitely has signing potential, it does sound a bit on a repetitive side. Something is missing, though. The hook is great but a bit too repetitive. I can't put my finger on it but it kind of reminds me of a good story but without a climax. It intrigues, gets your attention but leaves something important out of the punchline. At buildup, around 1:50 mark I think it needs something more massive, maybe a slight deviation from the main theme - something that can be classified as "destroy the dancefloor" piece.
I mean it would get people moving but will not stand above the rest. Also your drumbs seem to be a bit on a "dry" side, while the rest of the track is "spacy". Drums track can probably benefit to be either put slightly on the "wetter" side or moved a bit in the back, not so much "in your face".
Hope it makes sense... Though don't fudge around with the track too much - it definitely has quality feel to it.
BTW, what did you use for drums and all those swooshes/fx?
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