'ello, all.

I'm collaborating on a trance song with someone, and we're getting to the point that we're looking for honest feedback on our song in order to make it not suck.

Not a direct download

It has a basic structure down, but we aren't entirely happy with the breakdown or the outro. Any feedback or suggestions on any parts are well appreciated, though, so fire away.

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i really liked all the way up to the breakdown (REAALYYYY!!!!)

after that it got too.... standard and predictable. first part is really good work though.

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