Title:Shawn V - Beach Tremors

Style: Progressive/Trancey

Length: 10:57

Bitrate: 128 Stereo

Production: Fruity Loops 3.4 with V-Station VST, Z3TA+ VST, + various WAV samples

Post Production: Soundforge, T-racks



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Dont expect this track to be pro, im still new at this. Please let me know what you think

It's not that bad, it's almost entirely mono though, maybe that's because of the way you compressed it dunno. That ticking thingy, like a metronome is working on my nerves after 10 minutes though It's a very thin song also. Try to fix that. And maybe ad some variation to it.

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1st... all clips are supposed to be at least 160kbps (as stated above)

OK-->oh no! not a whistle!! LOL Interesting percussion.. you a drummer? nice progression there with the perc loops. Crisp sounding.

Cant believe its fruity actually! Nice post prod work Matrox! The build at 4:30 is cool. This is progressive trance? I must be into more uplifting stuff...still waiting for a catchy melody...
any melody actually would be welcome. Maybe just me. Did you have vocals or acapella to this at one point? I would almost swear it.

That higher freq synth at about 6:30ish should maybe be developed into a better lead (or a melody even).

I was hoping for a buildup to something incredible but...
Great production values none-the-less, Matrox!



edit: oh yeah do the right thing... listen to mine now and trash..er .. critique my work!

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OK, thanks for the feedback guys.

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It's not that bad, it's almost entirely mono though, maybe that's because of the way you compressed it dunno. That ticking thingy, like a metronome is working on my nerves after 10 minutes though It's a very thin song also. Try to fix that. And maybe ad some variation to it.

the ticking thing? i guess i gotta remove or change those hi hats.

Yeah i know its kinda thin. Im still struggling with that part. When i add more riffs i get melody clashes. So ill probably have to read up on some theory.

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OK-->oh no! not a whistle!! LOL Interesting percussion.. you a drummer? nice progression there with the perc loops. Crisp sounding. Cant believe its fruity actually! Nice post prod work Matrox! The build at 4:30 is cool. This is progressive trance? I must be into more uplifting stuff...still waiting for a catchy melody... any melody actually would be welcome. Maybe just me. Did you have vocals or acapella to this at one point? I would almost swear it. That higher freq synth at about 6:30ish should maybe be developed into a better lead (or a melody even). I was hoping for a buildup to something incredible but... Great production values none-the-less, Matrox! edit: oh yeah do the right thing... listen to mine now and trash..er .. critique my work!

nah im not a drummer. Im trying to go for more between trance and progressive. I know what you mean by a catchy melody, i just suck at making them and making it in key with the rest. No i dont have any vocals or acapellas. Ill work on the build ups. And ill check out ur choon

Thanks for the feedback

sup

mint percussion, quit relaxing sounds, but they are a bit weak, and ya i miss a climax thingi or something catchy.

and the most important thing i didn't hear..a bass?

also you mite wanne improve the kick, and unless you won't add anything new , i suggest make it a bit shorter..

thats all

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

The drum, percussion and the bass is very good produced. But the melody gets a bit boring imo.

Cool perc. man. . . .