i really like this one a lot ron.

Hi,
Listening to your work. Cool tune! Heh,not perfect,but nice!
Well I'll not tell you anything about mixing and mastering this time, because I already told you a lot of times.
The open hit-hat in the begining is too loud... Maybe try to fade it in like you did with the clap and don't make it so loud.And btw,the clap sound could be sharper.
The moment I really liked was 0:55, when the kick starts.
About FX's... it seems like you sampled them from another tune(s).The first one at 0:13 sounds like in Scarab - Monday PM. Am I right ?
Hm...I'm wondering how do you begin producing a track. Do you start by making the kick and basslines? If not, you should. Anyway you should hear how does kick and bass sounds together.Mute all instruments,and listen just kick+bass,and nothing else.The kick and the bass are the base of the tune. I'm saying this because your bassline lacks some power. As I told in your topics, try to put a compressor on it, or a little distortion effect.
About the main melody... not my cup of tea.
Keep working,and make this perfect
Good luck!

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Last edited by Fractal on Aug-13-2004 at 07:47

tnx guys, ill work on those hi hats in the beginning, proly will do a fade in...
ill TRY to make the bass/kick better Fractal , but i cant promise nothing
and as for the sound u say i took from airbases song, ur wrong , its just a sample i found, never even knew airbase used the same one, but thats ok

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Really nice!! I love the synth arps, they carry the tune and are really nice and full and well set.
The bass sounds really good to me too, don't think you need to fix that too much.
Love the twinkling arps that begin around 3:00
Good tune m8!

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Love your work mate, and this is no exception. Quality work all round.

X-cellent! But you can still share full trax! You can pull them anytime a label asks without a problem!

Keep Up!

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Originally posted by Digital Aura But you can still share full trax! You can pull them anytime a label asks without a problem!

It will be too late to remove the link

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A friend of mine on the SONAR website just got signed and his song has been posted forever...he just kindly asked to remove the mp3 from the download page and they did. No probs. Everyone's happy.

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dlin as usual buddy. ill either post or message u feedback.

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Liking this one a lot buddy. as someone posted earlier (sorry guy, i think it was fractal or mike foyle that posted it, but since i'm editing its not showing up the prev. posts and im really tired right now), a few little things need to be fixed up and it'll be perfect. kick could be a tad sharper. like the effect at 0:53-0:54 as the kick comes in, but it comes on a tidge strong off the first one, and threw me off for a couple seconds. some of the effects are really nice though, and the melody is great (as always).

i like that slightly more driven sound u got going around the 3:45 area up to 4:05. sounds nice, keeps the tune interesting, and the buildup is good too! right after it though, 4:38 or whenever it ends, the kick still sounds a bit compressed for the last bit of the track. but again, love how you keep this track entertaining and flowing (likin that piano addition)

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Last edited by DjCommisad on Aug-14-2004 at 19:43

thanx for replies, if u can, listen again hehe
'cause i think ive mastered a little of the mastering hehe,
i just started using wavelab since a few suggested it, and looks like it helps A LOT
song is more clearer now, louder kick, .... everything better i think
so ya,
i hope it better now

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Nice song, good effects, piano i feel your style, why it is monotony for me?

Greetings

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