quote: | Originally posted by Mr.Mystery
Hmm, take a further look into the mastering, the bass/beat combo is overpowering just about everything else. They also sound quite muffled/lofi.
Your synths sound very thin and softwarey (Subtractor?), try adding multiple layers and unison to them. Your percs are also way too simplistic (or just drowned out by the bass) and don't create any kind of drive to the track. They also seem to be the same throughout the track, a bit of variation would be good.
I would also consider putting a longer breakdown in there and something different for the second part, it gets a bit too repetitive towards the end.
All in all you have a good melody and some nice ideas here but your production needs tightening up. |
got it 
will keep workin at it
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