Hi everyone!

I've never posted a track here before, but there's a first time for everything! I'm working on a new track called Spiral Motion "Lorelei", based on the following legend:

"According to German legend, there was once a beautiful young maiden, named Lorelei, who threw herself headlong into the river in despair over a faithless lover. Upon her death she was transformed into a siren and could from that time on be heard singing on a rock along the Rhine River, near St. Goar. Her hypnotic music lured sailors to their death. The legend is based on an echoing rock with that name near Sankt Goarshausen, Germany"

Some whispering vocals could perhaps be added soon, but I would like you to tell me everything you like and dislike about the production so far! Here is the link:

http://www.spiralmotion.net/lorelei.mp3

Also my new website is finally online! Artists sections will be added soon and some pages still don't work, but take a look if you want. Lots of cool trance info inside!

http://www.spiralmotion.net/

Ciao and thanks!
Mark // Spiral Motion

impressive stuff!

Made in FL?

lowend is abit muddy.. other than that its nice!

AWESOME !!!!!!!!!
the melody is kinda weird, but just awesome! breakdown is
production itself is top, everything sounds just good to my ears.... keep this shit up

Thanks for the kind comments, both of you!!

Indeed made in FL
I know about the lowends, I'm trying to work on that but still find it hard to get the ultimate crispy sound.

Any more comments?

Ciao!
Mark // Spiral Motion

Sloooow download...but at least you have a cool website to gawk at! Nice!
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OKay...here we go... wow this is loud!! hehe..

Got a real driving feel to it. Melody is weird...as in ... NON-EXISTENT. Cool sounds...just need a lead to come forth and start some kind of melody. (Sounds like you've got about 5 or 6 pads but no actual lead for a melody.)
MAD PRODUCTION SKILLZ though! Nice work on this! Go make a hook though!

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Sounds great! Those chords remind me of some anime, perhaps Ghost in the Shell - which is a great vibe!

Nice production, good driving bass, excellent fx. Good work!

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wow man, really starts off nice! Nice bass, nice SFX! I don't really like the clap used, tho... could be my opinion Build-up is good, maybe you could do a little bit more with the melody, tho!

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Thanks for the tips people, keep 'em coming!!