im new to this forum and it seems that a lot of you guys really know your stuff. im fairly new to the whole production thing and would appreciate any feedback you could offer on my productions. my latest tune is a collaberation between me and my friend mark. it can be found at

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/hughtollandmusic.htm

any feedback is good feedback, thanks in advance

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Firestorm, F&SA

I guess I'll be the first to respond...Just DL your track...I like it alot...it's got a good intro, the bass has a good drive to it, the middle has some good melody...If I had to pick one thing to change, it would be the Lead instrument when the main 'meat' of the song kicks in at 3:00 min...it just sounded a little dull...but don't get me wrong, this is a great tune!

The intro sounds sort of familiar....

You could use some slightly fatter synths in the intro, IMO.

I don't really like how harsh your 303-esque acid bass at 1:25 or so gets so sharp. I think you could do something to tone it down. Bring out the root tone more, I think.

I like your lead.

I liked listening to it. I think the one thing that could use improvement was that acid bass. Other than that, you have a pretty solid track here.

cool, i'll try and sort those things out then, cheers.

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Firestorm, F&SA