needs improvement, however major elements are already in the way


heres a link

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/512projectmusic.htm

ment to be psy, of course..
solely hypnotic module direction

No offence, but if you're already planning to make major changes and improvements then why have you chosen to share the track as it is?

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I'll listen to it when it's finished.

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i posted it since the final mix down or "finished track" will be available in 4-6 months, so i've decided to share whatever i have now,

The track had been now updated big time!

um.... nope


sorry.

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joking

I like your style man, keep it up
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I see a lot of talent and ambition in your work...
there are some nice synthlines and FX... I especially like that wierd synth starting at 0:30...
however, you have to work mainly on technical issues. First of all, you need a bassline. A deep bassline giving the song some more drive would be nice. Then you need better drumsounds, the sounds you're using don't sound good at all, especially the snare and the clap need some major changes...
And then there's mixing. One technique which could help is compression, mainly used on drums (but also on other instruments) to make them sound more upfront. The most important thing is EQing. Some elements and frequencies need to be turned up a bit more so that your track doesn't sound that 'empty'.

Enough criticism, I like your style, you got some nice idease... I just think you need spend a lot of work on these technical issues... then you could probably become a good psy producer.

Well don’t plan to become a PSY producer, just doing it for fun
Yes final mix down is very difficult without the real hardware; I also miss my midi device.

Time is another thing, since I am a student at a university, my second year, and time is one thing that I don’t have.

But thanks for feed back, I will make a baseline and equalize some things, this track needs to be taken apart