The work with the synths is really good, but it miss some instruments, add some shakers, open hat, or others deep sounds, and your track'll be released for sure !

Your percs are really weak, they don't carry the tune at all.
Your melody is quite nice but it's something that's been done a million times before. Likewise with the sounds, they're all just too standards.

This tune seriously needs a pad and some extra synths too.

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Sound very much like Y Traxx – Mysteryland, abit to much if you ask me. Not only that the synth work is almost identical the melody is very similar as well.

But anyhow… pretty good job. Nice sound quality and great synth work.
Though a good bassline is really missing here and so is the percussion there just isn’t enough drive in this tune. It lacks the energy a decent uplifter should have.

Well done though, its always nice to hear works of fellow Israeli artists

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Hmmm u made in this fruityloops or fl studio didn't you? i hope i'm right cuz i recognize the plucked sound the song is way too dry...you need to add some pad and some reverb. Bassline line needs some more. I like the melody. Very laid back.

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Hehe , your wrong...
he did it with Logic...
and i also think that some things should be added to this track..

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