Hey everyone this is my first real stab at producing tracks and i put a near 20 hours of work into this track. Please let me know what you think or what i should do. I know there are some experienced producers on this forum and i appreciate any help... oh and it was produced solely off Fruity Loops Studio 4.1.

genre: epic/progressive trance
the link:

http://www.djthunder.net/mixes/HDT-...NDER Remix).mp3

-thunder
www.djthunder.net

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Last edited by deejayTHUNDER on Aug-23-2004 at 20:32

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ok i just corrected the url link to the mp3...

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I like the piano sound (although it there's something thin about it), I don't like the underlying lead synth below it. The bassline is good, but the arragement just seems to be missing something, the percs seem to have something... too much maybe? I'm not sure how to explain it, sounds a bit hollow overall. Not a bad first production though.

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thanx for replying bro... i'll get to tweaking tonite probably =)

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Electronica is musical evolution happening before your very eyes & ears. You have no choice but to embrace its constant forward progress for what it is. Something as an artist and a listener I have come to make a place for in my mind, body and soul...

Bassline in this track is nice, but is a bit too loud, rides over other sounds. The percussions, as a whole, may be fixed up to be a bit more complex and driving. But the melody is real nice, I like it, only the piano might have been better off being some other instrument (somethin a bit more innovative and inteligent). Other than that, good solid production.

Stan.

piano sound is good..

keep it up.. practice makes perfect

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thanx for taking the time to check out the track stan i appreciate it i really respect your production work.

majiko thank you as well for taking the time to dl the track and give me feedback on it... i'm on it bro and i'll definately keep at it...

theres a few other tracks that i have in the works that are a little harder leaning towards my derb and cosmic gate influences that cater to a darker sound that i wish i had a crowd to pump to here in miami with hard kicks and imposing vocal samples... anyways i'll have clips of the tracks i'm working on up soon for critiscism/comments/thoughts, etc...

thunder
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me AND my gf downloaded it, we think its str8 as hell bro, mad fkn props, i shall stay posted as much as possible... good luck with The Forge too. =)

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