Hey all. I haven't been producing for very long but I'm really starting to like it and will continue to learn as I go along. I have two track which I would like to get some serious feedback on.

The first is fairly complete...it's called Solarflare and it's a chillout track inspired by an art presentation I had to give at school where I was showing off my artwork throughout the school year.

The 2nd track is not really finished but I'm stuck on where to take it. It's titled "Eastpark Blvd" as it has a more eerie sound to it.

Solarflare http://music.download.com/kevinbenn...7.html?tag=list

Eastpark Blvd (I hope this doesn't get taken down too quickly...it will be on the same page as Solarflare tomorrow possibly) http://members.rogers.com/kbennell/kevin_bennell.htm

they are both 192kbps mp3s

Enjoy!

edit: forgot to add, Solarflare was made in Fruityloops, and Eastpark Blvd was made in fruity/cubase

Am I the only one who thinks it's not a big deal to go to your page and dl it from there? sheesh

About your first song:
I think it needs more details (such as sfx and more percussion) The melody is a bit strange, but acceptable. That steel guitar (or harp synthy thing) is a bit to loud in my opinion.
More sfx are really important in this tune! Try to collect some pieceful nature-sounds or something.

Somehow, I can't save the second song

Just keep on workin'!