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Thanks Massive

btw.. I'm a girl.. haha ..No technical hehe

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Last edited by moolow on Sep-18-2004 at 09:40

Good bass & energy that matches the synths just great. There's only one synth that's seriously annoying me: It starts at 00:56 and ends at 01:24. I guess you know which synth I mean. It's returning lateron, maybe you should cut some bass frequency's from it. The rest is just great, nice synth strings and variations at 03:55 And then it works to the end with a progressive melo, great!
Maybe you should make some rhytmatical variations in it and it's done.

Thanx Websley ..gonna take your advice and remove the synth at 0:58 ..thanx!

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nice energy in that riff in the intro.

perc needs more i say, few more layers .

those floating voices are nice, yours?

pads are nice also.

bring the clap a bit more up in the mix.

i say remove the bass from the break and add a big bass string. it goes to fast for my taste, don't know if all chords of the pads are correct, few transitions sound weird.

from 3.50 it sounds like it is building up again, don't do that let it explode.

bass is cool, just needs more sub i think.

melody is cool, but the bass or melody sounds at 4.42 off.

certainly not bad, just need some more work, mainly arrangment.

hope it helps

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

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Originally posted by Massive84 those floating voices are nice, yours?

It's not my voice. Was trying to make the synth sound ''voice-alike'', seems to work!

Thanx for the advice's ..I will definitly do something about the bassline at the break Thanx!

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Excelent chords, real nice and dark! itd sound class as an intro, if you use those chords played through real string orchestra sounds. very nice indeed.

not bad, some of it has a tiesto-ish feel to it, the bass is a bit too muddy and is lost, percs could do with a couple more layers and the main synth needs a bit of fine tuning. the pad and arpeg saw are done well and the melody is nice until the last 2 key changes where it doesnt flow with the rest. good effort tho

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Tiesto, gii ..wow! Thanx!

Thanx u guys. Are going to make a rework soon!

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yeah, it's pretty good!! i'd be interested in hearing again once you implement the changes.

Thanx sisterbliss!

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