hey guys,

another new production from me, in a new style, under a new alias, called Dawn Horizon, i would like to show you a sample of my first ever progressive trance tune, and i would like to have your opinion about it,

Dawn Horizon - Everlasting Life (sample)

hope you like it!

feedbacks, suggestions always appreciated!

thanks in advance,

Peter

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Downloading now pete. (beat u to it Ron!)

Sounds good. Tighter on the low end than the latest Mycron track sample you just put out.

Nice and chill, cool effects at 0:30 and 2:30. Might want to do a couple more or one that's a bit longer, a big nice bar long or two bar trailing off swoosh!

I understand not wanting to put more melody in or what not, because you wanted to try something different.

What you may want to try, is fattening up that kick a bit, or adding another one in or something, to add a bit of interest back into the track, its a bit too chill and relaxed for my tastes.

Maybe finish this off and do a remix with breakbeat style or something just for me

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Last edited by DjCommisad on Sep-24-2004 at 23:08

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Originally posted by DjCommisad Downloading now pete. (beat u to it Ron!)

bah
bastard
ill download later

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Really liking this.

Might take a look at the kick. It could be a little more fatter..
Though not nessecary, cause it works fine just like this.

Very chilled out and such..

-Matti-

a little slow
sounds are good,
the bass is very big, good kick and clap
overall not bad, not my style, but its ok
ttyl

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Hi Pete!

I like the minimal percs, and the bass is a nice metallic groove that keeps its driving.

Looking forward to the finished tune!
Trev

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percussions are alright
some good sounds
but I think u need more layers of sound.. cause I think it do sound very thin..
very little happens in this track I think as well

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Sound rather normal to me. But I think U have to add in alot of layer koz I find it kept it going but must nothing surprise me much. Nicely done but its aint my style.
Cheers mate.

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for your first try at progressive, this is ok.

i like the bass instrument, and the bouncy rhythm. the only problem to me is that the 2nd bass note you go to seems to be a bit out of tune. i belive if you experiment with the bassline you can find one that is much more harmonic (the first note is ok to start on, but the note you drop down to seems like it could be a different note).

keep at it though

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hey mate, sorry for the late reply!
i often forget about tunes i downloaded the melodies in this one are really nice! but the overall sound is a bit flat. the sounds seem to merge into eachother ot something, cant really explain :S
and i agree with extalin on the bass note, it sounds off to me.
other then that i enjoyed it keep it up!

john

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