Hi guys - recently dug out my first ever tune I produced sometime early last year! I have never placed it up on a forum so I'll put it up for download so you can all have listen! Its abit repetitive in some places and I know it ain't great but I think there are some nice aspects to the tune especially the bassline! Some feedback would be nice just out of interest. Sorry I had to put it up on that 'You Send It' cos I have no webspace!

Click here!

Last edited by retiro on Sep-28-2004 at 17:11

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the link is back up now - my apologise!

I love the synth, melody is also great. At times it sounds like it gets to heavy though and overpower the rest. You should try and vary it, there's no real climax, I was waiting for this extra but was dissapointed when nothing came
It has potential, you just have to let it out, try work some more on the melody.

Kicks sounds alright, a little mastering could do. Overall it's not bad at all.
Keep it up!

thanks for the feedback! like i mentioned this track was made sometime ago and have since made major step forward in producing (more to come on that later)! i totally agree about the climax etc - not bad considering a first time effort! i put it up cos the track was hiding among my cdrs so i though i'd share it with you guys for a laugh! maybe i'll do a 2004 mix as this seems to be the fashion these days ;-)!