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RickyM
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Registered: Sep 2004
Location: Northern Ireland

Really Uplifting Trance Song

.....In My opinion obviously, but i'd like to hear some other opinions.
It was made in FL Studio, so don't be expecting it to sound very professional, but please try and appreciate the uplfiting melody that I created.
Thanks for any feedback

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It is called 'The Forgotten City'

Thank you

Oct-01-2004 08:34 United Kingdom

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RickyM
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Registered: Sep 2004
Location: Northern Ireland

No one any opinions? I need feedback please!!

Oct-01-2004 11:47 United Kingdom

Sunquest
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Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Thornhill,Toronto, Canada

hey ricks
ok first off, too much reverb, WAY TOOOOOOO much
good soft intro, maybe a little too long, now it all kicks in, hehe it kinda sounds like eurodance :S , a little too amateurish i might say, but keep practicing, but u know where to put ur notes so ur def. on the right track

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Oct-01-2004 12:24 Canada

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eulerfx
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Registered: Apr 2004
Location: Boulder, USA

quote:
Originally posted by Sunquest
hey ricks
ok first off, too much reverb, WAY TOOOOOOO much
good soft intro, maybe a little too long, now it all kicks in, hehe it kinda sounds like eurodance :S , a little too amateurish i might say, but keep practicing, but u know where to put ur notes so ur def. on the right track

too much reverb? - what is that?

The melody sounds nice, but I think its too old school. But you're right, it is uplifting!

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Oct-01-2004 15:39 United States

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alexpea
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Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Mosjøen, Norway

The producing isn't very good, but I have to say you've made a really nice melody and those pads are beautiful...Onyl - you're using the wrong instruments on the elements. The pads sounds like a christmas-song or something... Also - make that hihat between each kick louder and more clashy.

This production sounds exactly the same as mine did a year ago. Keep on working, and you'll experience great progress! And it's a wonderful feeling, I promise you. And then you'll be looking back on your earlier productions and laugh.

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Oct-02-2004 02:50 Norway

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RickyM
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Registered: Sep 2004
Location: Northern Ireland

Thanks Alex- - your opinion matches mine - as my producing is crap to be honest - I need some software with more professional sounds - as FL Studio - good for making loops - but the sounds are a bit too amateur-ish.

Oct-02-2004 17:22 United Kingdom

carl-b.mine.nu
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Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Gothenburg, Sweden

quote:
Originally posted by RickyM
Thanks Alex- - your opinion matches mine - as my producing is crap to be honest - I need some software with more professional sounds - as FL Studio - good for making loops - but the sounds are a bit too amateur-ish.

trust me... it wont make any difference with another sequencer... just practice!

Oct-02-2004 17:28 Sweden

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Hydroid
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Registered: Jan 2004
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quote:
Originally posted by carl-b.mine.nu
trust me... it wont make any difference with another sequencer... just practice!

100% right!!!
you just need practice!

Oct-02-2004 18:02

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josh rising
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Registered: Aug 2004
Location: tampa, fl

Holy shit that is a really good track, I just agree, make the hi hats a little louder and put much less reverb! Nice job tho!!

Oct-02-2004 19:33

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Digital Aura
Project5 Guru

Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Sarnia, Ontario Christian Trance Producer

The first minute and a half was kinda annoying IMO.
Yeah...the reverb is excessive.
The melody is pretty sweet...(Im a sucker for uplifting!!!WOOOT! ) K...i like what i hear besides the reverb thing. NICE.

4:00 - Oh no...we're back to this intro. Seriously chilled...but I dont like it in this song. Whats with the last 1:34? hehe TRIM!