Hey man you have a good idea coming up
I think you use some nice chord progressions

If you really want the track to sound Goa-ish
I think you need to have a lot more going on in there...Your main percussions need to keep building up and also if you throw in some other instruments that compliment your main melody it will give your song a more fatter feel to it

Anyways thats just my 2 cents...

i like some of ur ideas, im really into goa / psy.

Id say little more percussion and odd timings, like an different beat here and there would be nice (not allways 4 on the floor).

2:00 nice wee break there good concepts

wouldnt mind hearing this once u have more of it done

some of the sounds are far too loud in the mix, so a little tweaking of the master levels wouldnt go a miss

overall an interesting listen

good work my friend

I've done some work on it. I won't have time to upload a new sample tonight, but thanks for the feedback.

hey man if u like goa / psy stuff check out my latest track in the making:

over here!