when u start mastering, u should work n the kick alot hehe, its very weak :S
overall the track is really empty, the voice is nice, but u need somthing to fill it up between the kicks, all i hear is string in the middle of the track, bass, kick, percs, and the voice

overall melody is pretty kewl, its nice and chilly, could use a blank and jones remix, this would REALLY fit the love parade in germany, just their style, nice and simple
i like it, just needs some work!
keep it up
peace out

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Cheerz (maybe i should just give up now)

You are right - It needs something more complex to fill it out a bit.

Is the bass drum really that weak - shit?!

I does uses quite live sounding percs this maybe why it all u hear!

thx anyway. By the way I Really really like that Journey Tune you made, its inspired me to get more melodic i think.

thx though
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np m8
one thing: NEVER give up
im telling u right now, u have what it takes, just keep workin at it, practice is the key! and im not bullshitting
just fix the track, its good,

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