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I need to share this with you... I've posted one other track here before and I recieved alot of feedback thanx alot everyone for that

I really feel like I've expressed what I was actually feeling in the moment. Please give it a listen and let me know what you think. I'll probably do some more work on it but it's pretty much done. In the moment there was this little kitten who's eyes were all messed up and I wished I could help it but there wasn't anything I could do, it made me think of how sad the world is sometimes. It might sound silly to you but thats what inspired this melody.

I've actually almost finished 4 tunes in the last 4 months. So I'll be posting those up as I finish them as well. I really want to get some feedback to see how I'm doing

Well anyway I hope you enjoy, I put my all into everything I do.

Airyck - Sad World (192kbps) download

feedback is appreciated and very kind of you (I know it takes time )


~Airyck~

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Last edited by Airyck Sterrett on Nov-24-2004 at 10:17

I like it Great sound quality and mastering! What did you use to make this? Software or hardware synths?

nice intro, very gabriel and dresden feel to it. I think if you got a good vocal through this it could have a good progressive crossover potential.

The sounds used are all very strong and the overall production and arrangement is all very good.

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Originally posted by markmoncrieff nice intro, very gabriel and dresden feel to it. I think if you got a good vocal through this it could have a good progressive crossover potential. The sounds used are all very strong and the overall production and arrangement is all very good.

Thanx Alot... I actually have a really good vocalist I could use on this song. She has been offering and i'm always like...I can't write words!!!
I'll see what I can do...she's moving away soon, so I should get at least a few recordings. She has such a beautiful voice.

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Originally posted by djkoolaide I like it Great sound quality and mastering! What did you use to make this? Software or hardware synths?

I used a little of both actually, but I sequenced it in Reason 2.5...

You live like 2 hours from me, wow I didn't think I'd ever see anyone from my area on here! awsome : )

Thanx for the comments I'm going to try and fix some of the levels in the melodies and add a few more things here and there, not sure about a few parts with the melodies...

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hey m8
sound quality is great as others said,
u just need some more fx and LOTS more elements in the song like melodies and fillers... i mean its going 3 minutes intro, and its all beats, gotta make it a little interesting in there
the melody is pretty kewl, i like it and i think the song fits it well
so just work on those things and thats it, really nice relaxing melody

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Awesome, yeah, definitely try to get some vocals in this one

Very nice song though! Add a few things like Sunquest said and I'd definitely wanna play this!

seems like the link to the song is broken for me let me know if there is another way to get it.

Cheers
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Originally posted by Sunquest hey m8 sound quality is great as others said, u just need some more fx and LOTS more elements in the song like melodies and fillers... i mean its going 3 minutes intro, and its all beats, gotta make it a little interesting in there the melody is pretty kewl, i like it and i think the song fits it well so just work on those things and thats it, really nice relaxing melody

Thanx for the comments : ), It means alot to me that "you" like the melody. I will put some more work into this, I think it could turn out really well.

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Originally posted by Petrogad seems like the link to the song is broken for me let me know if there is another way to get it. Cheers -Petrogad

sorry about that the link is fixed now, server it was on didn't get paid for...oops

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