hi guys ...just finished this track . what do ya say?

I'm sorry, but this track has a long way to go. I understand that this is your first track but there is a great deal that needs to be improved.

The synths are almost painful to listen to because you have too many of them playing different notes and as a result they clash horribly. The synths themselves also could use an overhaul. Most of them sound stale.

On top of this, there isn't anything to pad the numerous lead synths you have playing at the same time and the bass is weak. As a result, it feels like there is too much empty space between the synths and the percs.

The build up needs work and the atmosphere also needs to be greatly improved. It sounds as if the song was recorded inside a trash can.

hi redbull! yes its true that i have many synths with diff notes playing, but clash horribly/ sound stale? in one or two places or throughout?

the main prob i had here was trying to balance the levels bw the diff synths, since i was using 4 of them. as a result i had to increase their levels resp. this made the perc go low in some places. i cant say about the bass cause i dnt have a sub.

build up/atm/ thrash can!!?? he he so bad eh! anywaya thanks for the points man. oh by the way its not my first.

come on guys thorw ur views out..