Registered: Jul 2004
Location: 3rd Planet from the Sun
[listening to it now]
hmm...hard to tell with such a short sample, but it's not bad, when adding more elements, i would suggest more melody to the break possibly. Or even a slightly different chord progression, just to seperate the intro from the main theme.
I think the music that you have now makes for good compliment to the main melody that you might add later.
I think you right, i dont know if there is enough melody in this tune or too much.
I will have a rethink.
Nov-03-2004 02:08
bananas
baby i got your money
Registered: Oct 2004
Location: Mordor
I really liked your sample, post when U'll get all song done, tho your avatar makes me ill
Nov-03-2004 20:06
pho mo
tropical bliss
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Darwin
yup, make sure you finish this, i like it.
the melody is effortlessly great, and sounds twice as good when the long notes (a-la 1:38) come in.
i'd do a bit of work on the bass, sound a bit like you're squashing a frog...
Nov-04-2004 04:30
ichiro
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Sep 2004
Location: Dorset, England
jesus, good job u said that its given me some inspiration (especially given the quality of your tunes) - I was literally about to delete from my hard drive!