I think you could of had a bit of a build to the main part of your track instead of it just more or less kicking into gear right away. That synth you have around the 2:20 mark sounds a little confussed to me, maybe a little to much reverb used on it? Still I listened to it all the way through and quite liked it. Good one .

i think that the synth thats through most of the track is to loud...

if you work at it more then it will be good...

i think it needs cleaning up a little thats all...