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The volume has to be turned up quite a bit, but the main problem with the sound, is the kickdrum. It has so much base in it that you HAVE to keep it that low. You should EQ it, and make it more punchy. I like the popping basslines in the beginning. Oh, and don't use those open hihats at the start of the song. Use some closed hihats at the beginning, and then replace them with the open ones later on to make a progression during the track. You know... To build the tension.  At 1.00 you add a crappy bassline... It kinda destroys everything. This bassline which is playing every second 16th note. Sounds like a guitarbass or something... Now I can certainly notice the lack of punch in the kickdrum!!! Oh, I like 02.14 when the bass changes! At 03.02 you add a guitar. EQ it to make it brighter, and remove that annoying bassline while the beautiful guitar is playing. I concider 04.10 as the main-takeoff, but it doesn't really bring anything new, so it was boring. Also, the buildup was terrible, because you've used a snare with way too much punch/bass, and to little high-freqnezies. Overall a decent tune. Some nice ideas, but you've worked to little on each individual sound here... 
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