This tune isnt finshed jet. To finish it I need some feedback, please criticize anything u dont like tell me which parts u like I will really much appreciate it.

Cheers

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hey m8 , i wonder if ur the guy hosting the tiesto party in december hmmmmmmz

anyways, about ur track, kick needs stronger, could use a little more reverby effect on ur synths and percs, i think your bass is off note to the melody as well hehe
structure is not bad,
keep working on ur mastering and the notes, make sure theyre not off note
play around a little more
g'luck
peace out

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Thank you for the comments. I hadnt noticed about the off-key, cheers for that.

About the tiesto thingy, yes it is me and a couple of collegues who are bringing tiesto to Mexico at the end of december hopefully for NYE if thats what you mean!

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The track has been updated.

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Hey Orange Project

To me the bass sounds off key from the tune - it sounds fine for the first two parts - and then goes off key on the 3rd note change. I like the synth though. If you change the bass then you will have a nice song. Also - the hard synth at the very start is great - but is at the wrong note as well.

Rick

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Originally posted by RickyM Hey Orange Project To me the bass sounds off key from the tune - it sounds fine for the first two parts - and then goes off key on the 3rd note change. I like the synth though. If you change the bass then you will have a nice song. Also - the hard synth at the very start is great - but is at the wrong note as well. Rick

working on it!

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Good stuff - feel free to tear my next song apart when I upload it!

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Does it sound better now?

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Still bass sounds off key - ill tell you what I mean

Listen to your tune from 1.10 it sounds fine until 1.16/1.17 when the bass goes off key.

Maybe its just my F*cked up ears???

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I know what u mean now, Ill try to fix it. Thanks for your help!

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I think Ive fixed it now (I hope). Have u uploaded ur tune?

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Like the melodies a lot.
Maybe u could add a new bassline in it. Otherwise. Great track!

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