Very dark intro. I think the strings could be richer ... break is immense, bass is deep and pretty atmospheric. Then ... it stopped. I think you should upload a sample over 2 minutes because you'd most likely get much more feedback. Pretty good though from what I can hear.

--joey

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The chord progression and percussions are very nice. You should try finishing this

i like this one, mate

i like the break, and same goes for the atmosphere, the percussions are ok, you should only work on the melodies a bit,

keep it up, mate

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When I first looked at the title for this track, I thought it said "Marijuana." This is probably a sign that I need to be getting more rest.

It's not bad. The pad seems kind of flat, if you ask me. There wasn't much more to go on, really. I like what you've got going, though.

Nice mood here, good melody. Not much to go on because of the short sample. I found the open hat panned full-right to be slightly odd, but then i'm listening in headphones so it probably doesn't matter. The pads and the main melody synth are a little flat, you can do some work on them to make them more interesting. I am looking forward to hearing the full version, as it sounds like you can make this track really beautiful

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thx, I will definitely try working out something with those pads, and leads, and that open hi hat probably needs more centre..

and Jax: u need a little rest man

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this one is very deeo/emotional... Although I think the soundquality is rather muddy.. The track needs more high freq.

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Hey nice chords in the intro,the pads sounds kinda weak maybe they would sound better a bit fatters?at 1.00 turns really wicked,waiting for the finishe thang .
Kopi =o.

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very good pads, melodie is quiet good but whole track lack of energy you should add something to make it but except that its ok

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yeah, i agree about the chord-progression and synths...very nice...although the pad could be less "sawy", imo!
and it needs some more elements in the break, to make it sound more interesting...add some fx...

but i´m sure you´ll get a very nice result, when it´s finished! good luck, mate!

thx alot for the feedback guys.. I am at the moment struggling to fill up the empty parts in the breakdown..

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