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After that one, well ... I've decided it's a good idea to actively write the review as I listen to the song 
The first thing I noticed, to second what Subtle said, is the fx are too obvious. It almost makes them sound like an accident.
I'm at 1:42 and I really like what just happened. I think you should swap what you build up with to what just got added to give it that subtle (hehe), progressive drama.
During the first break, drop the kick or move it closer to the begining of the break, it sounds off. Again, in the middle of the break, the fx are waaay to much in the front when they could be used through out the break sparingly to add tension.
Oddly enough, while I was writing the last line about the spell checker, I jumped back to winamp to see what the time was at to let ya know that something else should be happening. Welp, five minutes into it and the song still doesn't have a solid direction, lead, or hook.
Don't get me wrong, it's not horible and there's definately room for improvment. At this point it's just not uber enough to compete with the mad amounts of trance being released out there with the same sound.
Ahh ... I love what happened at 7:30ish! Totally wasn't expecting it but it sounded good, so why's it at the end? Finally, the drop at the end is way too abrupt for my personal mixing style, but I don't generally spin this type of trance. 
I want a damn spell checker for me to use in these forums! :P
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Releases....
Stream Relentless - What You Want (Radio Edit)
Stream Relentless - Keyed (Original Mix)
Stream Relentless - Temporary Happiness (Radio Edit)
Stream Relentless - Fades Away (Radio Edit)
Stream Relentless - State of the Union (Don't Be Pouty Vocal)
Sets....
Stream Download Uncompliant - May (Part 1)
Stream Download Uncompliant - May (Part 2)
Stream Download Uncompliant - June
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Krivi - Innominato [Trance] 224kbps |
