heres what u can improve:

The kick is wayy too low...eq it or find a better, stronger kick.
I dunno about ur clap either...sounds weird. Work on ur percussion. It seems vry random now. Work on ur eqing to get the sounds sounding better.

Study some sounds for ur future traks. You seem to have the arrangement part down...but gotta work on the sounds.

good work, keep it up.

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You've got some nice ideas in here, the melody is good - you just need to make it more powerful, for it to be an uplifting track.

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thx i will take in your points. , when u say more powerful what do you mean exactly -the lead synth?

Is the fact im using a very cheap soundcard mean im never going to get a great sound anyway.

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im using the same soundcard u have btw. check out some of my tracks at www.feelessence.com . Dont blame it on ur soundcard

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- Amurai - Angel Cry [Flashover]