link wont work steve, sort it out

___________________
EDM Blog
Hybrid - Break My Soul + Mixes
BT - These Hopeful Machines
Gorillaz - Stylo

for those having problems with the link - heres a new

steven dawson - new work

should work

___________________
Faithless - Insomnia (Steve's Sleepless Nights Remix)

tis not bad like steve

percussion as u say is the weak point. There just seems to be a lack of it atm makes and wot is there is very standard fare. Bassline is ok but maybe leave that in as a sub and drop a rolling bassline over the top to give the track more drive. The lead sounds very vanguardy if thats wot it is. Needs a bit of tweaking to give it a cleaner sound. quite like the evil sounding saw bass pad (Y)

decent melody overall too. bit more work and it could come along nicely

___________________
EDM Blog
Hybrid - Break My Soul + Mixes
BT - These Hopeful Machines
Gorillaz - Stylo

quote:

Originally posted by dj dawson uk everything else i have ever done has sucked in comparison.. however.. i know my percs still suck im going to be adding in some more counter melodies... but this is its current form gimme all your criticism please Steve

0:00 - 1:00 Very long beat intro. Maybe shorten a bit or even remove??

1:30 intersting pads/saw bass 1:40 Sounds good. nice sounds

I like the rythme. very catchy. tappen me feet tune

2:50 beat kicks in. It's all good.

-> 3:59 I thik i was expecting a bit more of a crecendo, but the song seems to windes up pretty fast. maybe add some more pads?

This is a great track. from 1:00 to 3;40 the track kicks ass. I was expecting it to rise up again after the 4;00 min mark but the song finishes up. I want more! it definitely needs those counter melodies.

Its a great track. Cant wait to hear the finished result.

___________________