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Hi,
Lots of energy in this one, though it sounds like you need to boost the low end a bit more. I think the melody could use some variation... it sounds a bit 'standard' if you know what I mean - like I've heard it before many times.
I like your percussion, they give the song a nice skippity feel.
I have to say I enjoyed Topless quite a bit more - I guess I'm a sucker for the prog sound!
Keep up the fine work,
Trevor
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