hi, nice to meet you. I love the acess sounds as well, I've always wanted to buy a virus c, but I always end up spending money on othr things instead !!

I'm listening through your track just now. The opening sounds a little sudden, maybe a reverse ride or a reverb kick would take the suddenness away a little.

The arrangement of the drums is nice, i like the way they continue to uild as the track progresses, I'd maybe bring the claps up very slightly as they sound a bit lost in the mix.

The string pad you used is really nice, quite bright but still full sounding, a little more reverb would give it a real epic feel.

I love the breakdown, it's one of those melodies that have the hair on your neck standing up, reminds me a bit of airwave.

When the track kicks back in, the main lead is a little overpowering, it's understandable tht you want to show off the sounds of the virus b though

Overall, it's a really nice epic/melodic track, good sounds and well arranged, I'd just think about tweaking a few levels in the mix to balance everything out and you should have a really good track on your hands.

Hope this helps,

Mark

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So that's how you get that sound! With a Virus!

Lol..

Anyway, I agree with the previous guy; you need to tweak the higher freqs and lose some of the ear-shattering high noise.

And your kickline is cookie cutter; try switchin' it up a bit. Pretend like you were doin it live, and base your bass some other genre's beats.

It has a very light cheery bounce, but the saw part at the end needs a little shortening or variation.

Sounds good though, 6/10!

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Only listened to the short sample . Very relaxing tune, i like it. I loves those strings! Any chance you post the full 192 version?

Peace.

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Thanks for your feedback!

Yes, i´ve to balance some levels...


@Eternal Music:
You can listen to the full 192 kbps - just click the right button (a little box with "Titel: Download" should appear when you move your mouse over the button...

I´ve fixed several things....

- changed BD + Bass
- added a Piano
- changed the mix


the link hasn´t changed

Hi,

Nice happy uplifting song! I think you need to lower the piano level just a bit near the beginning.. its too loud.

This is the kinda song that makes you wanna buy anything that little kids might be selling from card tables in front of their houses

Try add a lil variation to your melody to make it a bit more dynamic.

It starts to sound a lil muffled when you have a lot of layers going at once.. might be an EQing issue.

Keep up the fine work!
Trevor

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Originally posted by sooper This is the kinda song that makes you wanna buy anything that little kids might be selling from card tables in front of their houses

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