Was really just messing around in FL and this was the result.. so thought I would post it here and let you "Professional Amateurs" rip me to shreds Its the only way ill learn... and i wont cry.. too much

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Thanks

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- goatus

Hi,

not bad at all for your first attempt!

some cool sounds in there. Over all, the song seems to lack stucture and direction. I like the bass, though its kinda quiet, it has definate funk potential.

i think the song needs quite a few more layers.. pads and percs and some fx.

anyway, keep at it, you'll only get better and better!
and keep posting,
trevor

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