Another tune from me...

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This time is a Melodic tune... finished it within 3 weeks...
Done with FL Studio 5 Producer Edition...

Hope i do better this time

Please leave me some feedback n comment!!

Thank You my friends

EDIT: I have tried to improved according to the comment n feedback... Not much change actually... N What do you think? Is this better... Please feel free to listen to it again

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Last edited by DJ Dinz on Dec-12-2004 at 09:56

is my song that bad...??

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- nice bass in intro, i like how its not overly cut
- do you have to use a drum-roll?
- you need a louder 4/4 hi-hat, those hyper fast ones won't do alone
- nice sounds in break, but strings need to be smoother, increase the ATT a little bit
- The beat at 4:18 is a bit awkward, doesnt seem satisfactory
- After that, it seems to be building toward an explosion in melody and beat, but just stops
- Nice return to the outro
- Melody is kind of repetitive after listening a few times
- You need some more fx and percs

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Build is nice and crisp. Agree with euler though, the constant use of the roll is wearing thin alot. If your gona use it so much then try and variate it a tad. Anyways, I love the synths that hit after the break, reeverb is quality... gives a nice atmospheric feel. I'm not feeling the melody though. Lacks imagination and creativity. Bass is too low as well an the modded hats are really repetitive.

Definately has potential to be better this. Keep workin on it.

-Joey

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- The kick isn't clear.
- I liked the percussions.
- Bass is good.
- At 0:28, after the snare, I would expect an element or smth to appear.
- as eulerfx said, you need a louder 4/4 hi-hat.
- I didn't like that computer-sound around 0:50 & 1:36.
- Melody is ok..
- I didn't really like the melody takeoff at 4:16, I think you should add an fx there.
- And again as eulerfx said, add more FX
Overall I think it's kinda nice track, good work.

EDIT: I wrote only the things that IMO need to be improved! it's not that I didn't like the whole track or smth, cuz as I said you did a nice work there.

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Last edited by ronk on Dec-08-2004 at 14:53

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Originally posted by eulerfx - you need a louder 4/4 hi-hat, those hyper fast ones won't do alone - You need some more fx and percs

BTW what do you mean by 4/4 hihat.. & what is percs??
sorry for the question again...

Thanks you so much for hearing guys!!

CHeers!

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Thats good man. Needs alittle more fx work but sounds great. I like your drop and melody.

you did this all in fl? what vst are you using for your big melody?

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Originally posted by Lombardo Thats good man. Needs alittle more fx work but sounds great. I like your drop and melody. you did this all in fl? what vst are you using for your big melody?

Yes.. i did this all in FL 5.. For the big melody is not a VST... it is a simple 3osc that i destroyed...

i agree with u guys lack of FX... FX is an effect right?
haha...

Ronk:
It is ok.. even u say it sound like shit..hahaha i appreciate it.

THNX mates!

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sounds clean, good

i don't lke that clap... it's stere oseparated wayyy too much, it overpowers everything in the mix

throw some pads in there, piano is good, but i'm upset you up a chorus (or flanger) on it

i'm impressed with that lead, i can't believe you made it in 3xosc, how long did that take you?? heh

good song, you need to layer a little more and it will sound great

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Originally posted by EtherealSL sounds clean, good i don't lke that clap... it's stere oseparated wayyy too much, it overpowers everything in the mix throw some pads in there, piano is good, but i'm upset you up a chorus (or flanger) on it i'm impressed with that lead, i can't believe you made it in 3xosc, how long did that take you?? heh good song, you need to layer a little more and it will sound great

Ic the clap.. btw what do u mean by the chorus/flange... which part is it? How long i do the lead/ the mix? If it is the lead that takes 1/2hr hehe.. n the songs take it almost a month till now..
BTW THNX FOR THE FEEDBACK

CHeers!!

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