hey guys and gals sup????



after a long long time (precisly 1 and a half years) i finished my first remix and handed it to Mr.Matt Darey (to help me etc....)


I was wondering, if people can give me feedback...?

tis my FIRST remix - its not great (dont think anyway) - generally the feedback was good and some people said they would spin it in their set (no idea how they came to that conclusion)

I agree - percussion is simple - took me some time to do! if this is what your feedback is also - please tell me how to improve the percussion


www.soundclick.com/itmb

dont know if this direct link works:

http://fileserv1.soundclick.com/fas...ewleadsynth.mp3




please give me friendly feedback

Thanks

Last edited by itmb on Dec-20-2004 at 01:23

ill try my best to write a descent review

I like the beginning.. reminds me alot of good old trance.. I love the clap.. first hat is cool.. i dont like the first part of the break.. but when the lead comes in its kinda cool.. u should add more percussion when the tune kicks in after the break.. sounds too empty.. love the lead sound though.. and please swap the kick-roll with a snare rolls.. kick rolls doesnt work that well most often.. and i think u should only have one break down in it.. and fill the percs up more.. lower or lose those close hats..

oldshchool work.. not bad..

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ah wow! the admin of the site took his time out to reply thanks!

i agree about the percs - i need help on that and im glad you found the intro etc.. more of old trance - since that is what i was aiming for!

the breakdown hmmm - the reason i put in 2 was because - that is what the orig track had however its a different remix altogether - in terms of the samples and structure etc...

if you do produce - then please - feel free to pm me to help me improve the percs!

thanks mate - glad it was a good feedback

You've come a long way since early 2003 on t.nu. This remix is actually pretty solid, I agree with Subtle on pretty much everything. Keep at it man, glad to see you finally got your hand around trance and did not give up.

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it sounds more of a recreation than a remix

apart from that i cant really add much to what has been said already. string/pad section is cool, my fave bit of the track

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thanks guys - much appreciated

and SOM - thanks mate youve done alot for me an i greatly appreciate it

i thought remix was basically - well depends how ya define it - is where ya kinda redo everythin or whateva ya feel like?